Monday, December 12, 2011

blog #12

My most compelling evidence is my claim that students who take too many classes per semester will struggle through balancing out work for each class, stress and eventually perform poor on exams. My audience might be convinced by this evidence because they are familiar with it, especially students who have experienced it. With too many classes per semester, students might eventually have to repeat courses due to  stress and poor academic performance. This evidence will be mentioned at the beginning of my essay since it is a strong evidence that can be broaden throughout my essay.
My weakest evidence is that students will burden the financial problems by taking more classes each semester. This evidence is weak because it does not apply to everyone because not all universities charge more for every additional class student take. However, I will add to the evidence that if students fail a course, they might have to repeat course which will also make the financial problems even worse.

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