Monday, December 12, 2011

Blog #14

I chose to revise my argument analysis essay for my final portfolio. The strengths of that essay were I had a clearly stated purpose as required and good ideas. However, my summary and ideas were not completely clarified and organized.

To make effective revisions for my essay, I will clarify my ideas and better organize the summary and critique in different paragraphs. I will also reword and change my sentence structures to emphasize my indications. Lastly I will proofread it several times to catch every little errors.


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